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At the moment there are lots of things I like about this drawing - and a few things I dislike. This bit of the drawing I simplified. I just didn't want a lot of distraction down the left hand side, but still needed something there to provide some visual interest and notion of scale, hence the car. I'll fiddle with the dark area above the car as I'm not happy with it, maybe needs some gradation and be softer at the upper part of it. I don't mind the receding nature of the perspective, gives a feeling of fog and surrealism. And yes there are some surreal elements to this drawing.

Update: After seeking a second opinion I've decided to leave this as is. I think it now looks OK when the whole composition is taken into account. And, yes the god damn thing is now finished........at last.

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Thank goodness for that second opinion! FINISHED!?!

CONGRATULATIONS! So .... is the result a secret?

Posted by Anonymous on 04.02.08 at 06.13pm

For the time being it’s a secret, though I suspect it will be revealed shortly.  Stay tuned wink

Posted by detlef on 04.02.08 at 07.03pm

We are our own worst critics. Well done!

Posted by bluerose on 05.02.08 at 01.12am

I like it. It looks wonderful.

Posted by johanna on 05.02.08 at 08.52pm

I like the foggy surrealism of this drawing.  It puts me in a dreamy mood and I feel as if I’m in another time and place.

Posted by carla on 05.02.08 at 09.58pm

Beautiful work!
It reminds me a bit the work of William Kentridge, do you know him?Thanks !

Posted by maria on 20.02.08 at 04.28pm

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